Good work. One suggestion would be to edit out the huge number of exclamation marks, and another would be a spot of proof reading to weed out the spelling errors
I'm a fussy sod when it comes to language though...
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Thanks for the tips bigginger. Yeah I realise I use way too many exclamation marks and the text was only written tonight so needs proof reading and probably allot of adjusting.
Thanks for looking at it. I think you will be horrified when you get to the 'Other projects' page! It is very long so I am planning on splitting that up into several pages.
An age when roads were empty, machines were simple and every journey was an adventure!!
Didn't read that page in its entirety - I'll go back to it It's best, btw, to use exclamation marks just for exclamations, not as a sort of highlighting device. Enough from me
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Don't caravans make a huge mess when you chop em up? Used a £60 ebay special to make our car transporter
General presantation of the site looks good and really clean.
Large blocks of text with no images or linkys can seem a bit heavy going though.
Lawnmower racing hey - have a Suffolk Punch and an Atco sitting here that could maybe do with a bit more speed, as they only go at that classic 'just a bit too fast for walking'' speed
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Dear Spag, Yes the caravan did make a monstrous mess! There was polystyrene everywhere, sheet aluminium littering the floor all around us, and before we started there was also a complete interior and a load of rubbish inside. We simply took the aluminium to a scrap metal place and got £20 for it all and then burned all the wood from the interior etc we could. After that all the polystyrene insulation was taken to the tip in the trusty moggy
Lawnmower racing involved removing the engine limiter, tuning it and replacing the final drive gear ratio. After this they go like stink.
MrBenn thank you for your comments. I am glad you enjoyed it so much, it needs to be neatened up allot and spags idea of breaking up the text a bit will be a good idea. I will keep updating it as much as I can
An age when roads were empty, machines were simple and every journey was an adventure!!
bigginger wrote:Good work. One suggestion would be to edit out the huge number of exclamation marks, and another would be a spot of proof reading to weed out the spelling errors
I'm a fussy sod when it comes to language though...
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Have you ever read through our own 'About the Club' ?
I like it! Very well laid out. Interesting to find another person with a Moggy for a first proper driver... I agree, a few too many !s, but otherwise very good. Entertaining to read too- how'd you design it, out of interest? I'm thinking of setting one up!
Is rust infectious? My hands are turning red...
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jackkelleher wrote:I like it! Very well laid out. Interesting to find another person with a Moggy for a first proper driver... I agree, a few too many !s, but otherwise very good. Entertaining to read too- how'd you design it, out of interest? I'm thinking of setting one up!
Thanks Jack, I need to go through it and delete some of the '!' lol. Didnt realise quite how many I put in
Its very easy, there are several websites out there that allow you to create a website and host it for free. I am useless on a computer but theses websites also offer a web-making facility. Very simple to use and effective. You simply choose all the things you want and edit it.
Is rust infectious? My hands are turning red...
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Is rust infectious? My hands are turning red...
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